Thursday, September 16, 2010

Four Questions.

What one specific aspect of your paper are you proudest of? Why?
One specific aspect of my narrative essay that i am proud of is giving the reader the feelings that I felt while writing it.

What was the most difficult aspect of writing this essay? Why?
The most difficult aspect of writing this essay was thinking of a topic to write about. This was difficult because it was hard to recall something in my life that is essay-worthy.

Imagine that you have a few extra hours to revise this paper. What aspect(s) of the paper would you reword, write, and/or polish? Why?
With a few extra hours, I would go back and add much more detail to my body paragraphs. I would also write a better conclusion.

How would you approach such a revision?
I would approach such a revision by remembering everything I can about where I've lived and try to show the reader what I saw.


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