One aspect of my paper that I am proud of is the information i was able to give on both systems.
The most difficult thing about writing this paper was choosing the criteria for comparing and contrasting the two systems.
If i had a chance to revise this paper, I would definitely clean it up a bit. I would go into more detail about what each system has.
I would go about this revision by researching each system a little bit more.
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